Deviant Battle

A Fierce Deviant Battle: Fiercedeity1770 VS BigSheezy



Pre-Battle Information:



The battle setting: a rocky desert sort of location with a few hills, mountains, and rock formations close-by.

The battle participants (split into 2 teams):
Team 1
Fiercedeity1770 (aka "Fierce", because BigSheezy refers to himself as "me")
Neno1064 (aka Neno)
StickManiac (aka SM)
Kraymr Noobmin (just Kraymr)

Team 2
BigSheezy (aka "Big" "Sheezy" or "me" referring to himself when he types)
LilSheezy (aka "Lil" he doesn't talk)
Bax (just Bax)

Events prior to the battle-
I had discovered that ~BigSheezy was seeking out opponents for "DeviantArt Battles" so I offered to fight, and he said it would be ok, but I had to wait a little while for him to get ready so in the meantime, StickManiac, Neno1064, and Kraymr all prepared themselves for the match… StickManiac charged his explosive fists, Neno1064 stretched and practiced using her powers, and Kraymr began pulling out all sorts of heavy objects such as an anvil, weights, safes, etc. (stuff you would expect an "old-school" style character to have around) and began to juggle them. Now, at one point Kraymr wasn't paying attention and dropped one of the objects on his head, causing him to start getting a headache, but shortly afterward the battle begins…  




Fiercedeity1770
We are ready for battle!
*SM and Neno1064 step forward*
*Kraymr continues to juggle stuff*
I remark, "You're move..."

bigsheezy
well bax is on the field
mind if i add one more: ([link]1)

Fiercedeity1770
Very well… then how about... THIS!
([link]2)

bigsheezy
fine, lilsheezy, insane strike on fierce!
lilsheezy: uh, aaaah!
bax,dark hole on SM and neno!
Bax:hell ya!

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce uses dual sword block to counter the strike* "IS THAT ALL YOU GOT?!"

*SM stomps on the floor causing an explosion to send himself flying into the air.*

*Neno doesn't move... but she smiles*

bigsheezy
lil use close combat*lil throws punch after punch at top speed at close range*
lilsheezy:hu hu hu hu!

bax keep it up!
Bax: SM! fine run off, but neno is dead
*bax continues aim on neno*
Bax:die!


Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce continues to block the punches with his SWORDS* "Oh wow are you trying to turn your hands into confetti?"*

*SM is now so far up he is barely visible.*

*Neno materializes a weapon behind her back* "Get ready to fall!"

*Kraymr smiles and continues to juggle but then he drops another heavy object and it too hits his head. "Ooof! My head REALLY hurts!"*

bigsheezy
lil,are you ganna let him do that
lilsheezy: uhhh!*goes for a low kick and trips fierce*
yes!

Bax: were'd SM go*temporarily distracted from neno*

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce slowly gets up and says, "Heh you may want to look at your hands they're looking a little red". When Lil looks down at them, Fierce decks him in the face! Knocking HIM to the floor!*

*SM is still nowhere in sight!*

*Neno pulls out the weapon she had materialized, it's a...bow and arrow(?), but the arrows are glowing, one red... one blue... and one gold... she aims and fires a red one at Bax hitting him while he is distracted! He's covered in fire!*

*Kraymr whines, "Seriously you guys my head hurts... really bad!"

bigsheezy
lilsheezy: awww! *lil stands slowly* urrrggg!
lil use your rope *lil throws rope to fierce and grabs his leg*
lilsheezy: ha! *lil holds on and spins fierce in a rapid circle*hahahahaha!

Bax: ahhhhh! im on fire, im on fire!
calm down bax! use black hole!
*bax creates a black hole behind him to suck up the flames*
Bax:~few~is that all you got!*focased on neno*

Fiercedeity1770
*As Fierce is being swung around he pulls out one of his swords and stabs it into the ground. Sparks begin to fly as he slices a circle in the ground.*

*The sky gets a little dark... Thunder is heard in the distance. Still no sign of SM...*

*Neno says, "Just you watch!" she then fires an ice arrow at the ground around Bax's feet! Freezing his feet in place! Then she readies a light arrow and begins to aim at Bax!*

bigsheezy
oh no you dont,lil,defend yourslef,be ready for anything
lilsheezy:uh!*defence*

bax use dark hole agin!
*bax creates a dark hole under him,as he floods into it*
Bax:bye bye sweet cheecks!> *unfortunatly his feet are still frozen*

and watch out for the sky,i dont like the looks of this! >

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce continues to slice the circle in the ground sending sparks all over the place.*

*The sky gets a little darker and thunder sounds again in the distance, but this time it's a little louder... Still no sign of... SM*

*Neno fires the bright and shining light arrow but not at Bax, she fired at the ICE on the ground around Bax causing two things... 1st is that the ice begins to shine and reflect the very bright light everywhere, even as it is being sucked into the dark hole! and 2nd The arrow bounces off the ice and toward Bax still shining!*

*Sadly the bright flashes of light cause Kraymr to flinch and he drops all of the objects he was juggling. And yes they ALL hit him in the head knocking him to the ground! "Ohhhhh... Ugghhhhh... My... head... My aching… cranium."*

bigsheezy
lil, stay on your gaurd!
lilsheezy: um! *ready for anything*
watch out for the sparks

Bax: ahhh! the light, its interfering with my powers*falls down*ahhhh!
*fortuneatly the ice breaks

*i look at the sky*i dont like the looks of this!

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce starts to smile > but he continues his task of slicing a wide circle around lil (whether he is or is not still being swung around), but the slash is now getting deeper into the ground.*

*The sky grows very dark! Thunder gets even louder... and closer... but... still no sign of SM.*

*Neno looks up too, smiles, and says, "Time for me to go!" She shoots one more light arrow, again not at Bax, but at the remaining ice fragments around Bax's feet, and once again lighting up the area. In this flash she makes a dash towards Fierce and leaps into the circle.*

*Kraymr slowly and clumsily stands up in a daze. He starts walking slowly toward the lit area around Bax.*

bigsheezy
lil,watch out for neno
lilsheezy:hu!*lil attacks neno,with close combat*

Bax:my powers...my powers...to much light...dark holes not working!ahhhh!
bax,watch out for kraymer!

Fiercedeity1770
*As Lil attacks Neno, Fierce finally stops slicing the ground, and calls out, "Neno! Get to it!" And then he jumps in between her and Lil and takes over fighting off Lil, but as he does he says, "Stand down and stay still if you don't want to get seriously hurt!"*

*The sky is now VERY dark... all except for one spot in the clouds that's starting to glow faintly... THUNDER!*

*Neno says, "You got it!" And she then punches her arms into the ground in the center of the circle and suddenly out of the slashed circle comes a barrier dome projected around them.*

*(Background-mood-setting information) As the shield projects, she starts playing the song... "ThunderStruck!" by ACDC in her head*

*Kraymr stops walking, slowly looks up at Bax, his appearance is changed (he looks like this ([link]3)) He pulls a cup of tea out of the top of his hat, takes a sip, and says, "I conclude that you have a very discrete amount of seconds to acquire your sight back, but not nearly the sufficient time to take any efficient evasive maneuvers against what's approaching our current coordinates... Especially since our location was marked so visibly by the light arrows which have not only blinded your vision, but disrupted your "dark hole" vortex powers... Oh and one last thing, about this cup of tea... It was supposed to be a carbonated beverage-" Takes another sip and looks up.*

bigsheezy
background music([link]4)

Me:lil,break out of there!
lilsheezy:um*mesmerizd by the circle*
Me: oh crap,lil,pay atention D:<

Bax:i dont get your briany talk buddy,but im assuming it is
a long winded way of saying im screwed*looks up at the sky*
*stands up,rubbing his eyes*im not about to let some einstein
beat me!*powers up useing the darkness of the sky*hahahahaha!
and dont worry lil,i'll be there when im done with this geek!

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce screams angrily, "I SAID DON'T MOVE OR YOU'LL GET HURT!!!" and he then starts running towards Lil (He, Neno, and Fierce are all still in the barrier!)*

*Neno continues to strengthen the barrier and as she does, yells, "Brace yourselves! Here comes the-"*

*Kraymr pulls out a pocket watch looks at the time and says, "If that is your decision... to use more darkness to enhance your abilities. That is an excellent strategy. Except for one thing..." (Insert comeback from Bax here. Something along the lines of "WHAT?") "Those so-called 'Dark holes' draw things into themselves making them and their caster... incredibly simple targets to smite!"*

*Just then, A HUGE FLASH! A THUNDEROUS BLAST! And a bright fiery ball like a shooting star, IT'S THE STICKMANIAC!!! He comes blazing through the clouds straight for Bax's location (his speed is accelerated by the draw of the dark holes and his course is lit by the now fading light of the light arrows.) "BOMBS AWAY!! CONSIDER YOURSELF.... THUNDERSTRUCK!!!!", He screams. He then hits the target zone and the result is a massive flash of light engulfs himself, Bax, Kraymr, and anything or anyone else in the blast radius... which is roughly half a mile in any direction so yes the barrier is hit too!*

*After the explosion... hush... it's quiet... the area is covered in dust clouds and smoke...*

bigsheezy
Me, Bax, and lilsheezy: ahhhhhhh!
Me: were'd everyone go? *clouds blur there vision*
screw this *bigsheezy takes pencil, spins it in a circle to
blow out te smoke to see-* guy's

*bax and lil are standing side by side, unfortunatly weakend*
Bax: that was...*cough*...not half bad
lilsheezy: uhhh...*cough*
Bax:is that all you got, were still standing!*cough*

Me:this just isnt fair for them,they need help!screaw it im going in ([link]5)
*big joins lil & Bax*be ready guys!its still kinda cloudy,so i cant see them around

Fiercedeity1770
*Some of the clouds clear enough for the barrier to be seen, but as it does, the barrier is deactivated. Fierce and Neno are both standing in the circle, both are unhurt, but Neno is a little exhausted from holding the barrier up and is trying to catch her breath. "Come on Neno, we need to move.", Fierce said as he drew one of his swords "O-ok I'll try.", she said weakly as she stumbled to move forward. Fierce grabbed her, put her arm around his shoulder and then they moved into the smokey clouds... out of sight.*

*No sign of SM in sight too much cover...*

*Some smoke clears and there before Bax, Lil, and Sheez... stands Kraymr covered in ash. (Like how old cartoon characters looked after being blown up.) Kraymr coughs and starts to dust himself off as he says, "Ack... cough... Well... That was a most impressive feat that you are standing after such an impact, although it had not hit you directly, you have each taken heavy damage. Now if you would be so kind as to excuse me, I have a pressing matter to attend to." Kraymr turns and walks to the center of the circle.*

bigsheezy
Me:lil,use hyper active(power that enhances his sences)and go search for SM.
i think you can handle him on your own.

lilsheezy:umph!*runs into the clouds searching for SM,disapers from sight*

Me: Bax,you stay here and take care of kraymr,im going after fierce!
with him helping neno,that should slow them down!*bigsheezy runs the other
direction into the clouds after fierce and neno*fierce is mine!

Bax:well looks like its just you and me kraymr!despite that little shock
i think i was able to gain just enough time to get some of my power back!
*Bax charges up,to use his ultimate move*hope your ready,nerd!

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce and Neno make their way further into the smoke. Neno weakly say, "My audio sensors just picked up their presence, they're all up and BigSheezy is coming for us." "Hmmm... We need more time! Where is Kraymr?", Fierce whispered. "Bax is about to attack him in the circle.", Neno replied. "He better hurry..."*

*Rumbling sounds are heard and the ground shakes a little around the circle... Kraymr stands his ground in the circle, and smiles as he says, "I will be perfectly frank with you, although you and I stand before each other in combat, I am the least of your problems as history is about to repeat itself in a most abrupt manner!"*

*Dust begins to clear around the impact zone where SM had hit... there is a large crater and a dark blur at the very bottom of it."

bigsheezy
Me:there they are!*bigsheezy sights neno and fierce*your done!
*bigsheezy runs to catch up with them*

Bax:wut do you mean your the least of my problems?lil is out
taking care of SM,big is on fierce's trial,and your no match for me!
theres nothing you can do now

lilsheezy(somewere in the smoke searching for SM still):ummmm?
*lilsheezy ends up at the crater*uh?*he looks to see a blur at the bottom*
O.o (?) *he slides down to investigate*

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce turns to see Sheezy heading for them. "CRAP! Neno, get down, try to recover as soon as you can, I'll hold him off as best I can!" He sits Neno down on the ground, and then he draws both of his swords and takes a fighting stance. Neno is still trying to catch her breath and regain her strength.*

*Meanwhile, Kraymr says, "Over-confidence and underestimating foes has cost many a war throughout history. And I have said before, history WILL repeat itself today. Prepare to go up in a blaze..." He then looks at the pocket watch and yells out "NOW!"* ([link]6)

*At this moment, Lil would be able to see that the blur at the bottom of the crater is a hole/tunnel in the ground! And right as he would have discovered that, KABOOM! The StickManiac BLASTS up from underneath the circle area in the ground where Bax and Kraymr are... sending the two of them and a layer of the ground they are standing on, up into the air! "Catch this!" Kraymr says and throws one of the heavy objects he had been juggling earlier, at Bax who easily catches it, BUT... the weight shift causes the platform to tilt midair toward Bax's side, and then Kraymr jumps off the platform completely causing it to flip over and pin Bax down underneath it, slamming him down when it hits the rest of the ground again.*

*Kraymr lands on top of the slab and says to SM, "You are late you know. Go see about Neno and Fierce, I can handle things here at this time."*

*"All right, be careful!", SM then runs into the smoke after Fierce and Neno!*

bigsheezy
Me: oh no you dont*pulls out pencil(holds like a sword)and takes a stance*
you'v done well...*runs tword fierce*...but not well enough!
*big runs past him and tword neno instead*sorry fierce,but i can show no mercy!
now,be gone!ahhhh!

Bax:ahhhhh!...you,SM!...aggg!*pian of being crushed*looks like i cant continue to
fight,but i still have one trick up my sleeves!i may go down,but im not going by myself!
Giant Dark Vortex!*Bax creates a black hole that starts in the center of his stomach([link]7)
and starts to take up the rest of his body,as his last words are*see ya in hell!
*the sucking of the black hole completely ingulps bax,then the rock and then...kraymr*

Me,fierce,neno,SM,and lil: huh? *all look to see the black hole closeing with kraymr in it
Me: Bax! nooooooo!

lilsheezy:

Fiercedeity1770
*It seems like the world is moving in slow motion... Fierce has a decision to make... he only has time to save one of them for certain... The other... will be at the mercy of fate...*

*As he tries to think, he hears Kraymr call out to him even in slow motion, "Fierce!" Fierce looks over and sees Kraymr talking to him at normal speed holding the now glowing pocket watch... "Focus Fierce! I will be fine, do not worry about me... You know what to do... everything is ready and you CAN finish this... GO FOR IT!!!I'll be back..."*

*Just then everything goes back to normal speed and Kraymr... as he stands still calm, sinks into the dark vortex and vanishes as it seals up... only the pocket watch is left behind and it hits the ground with a clank...*

*The vortex had dispersed all the smoke so SM's location was revealed. He WAS on his way to help Fierce and Neno, but upon seeing Kraymr being obliterated... He stopped and ran straight towards Lil in a state of absolute RAGE and his fists begin to glow brighter than ever before!!!*

*Meanwhile, Fierce had made his decision and turned to intercept Sheezy, but it was too late... Sheezy stabbed towards Neno, but suddenly. SCHLINK!!! Sheezy's attack was blocked... by Neno herself who put her hand up and the weapon stabbed straight into it, but strangely... Neno does not react to the hit in pain... She just slowly stands up and and then... looks Sheezy in the eye with her RIGHT EYE! ([link]8) Yes! She had taken off her regulator eyepiece and was now rapidly regaining her powers back and more. She immediately pulls the weapon from Sheezy's hand, bends it in half and throws it away. "This was supposed to be a friendly competition... a fun brawl... but if you are willing to go as far as you have... SO. WILL. I!!!!"*

*Neno materializes 4 controller arms and each are holding a gun... 2 RCP90s, 1 grenade launcher, and 1 gatling gun. She immediately takes aim at Sheezy's head...*

bigsheezy
lilsheezy:uh oh!*sees SM runing tword him*umph,ahhhhhhh!
*lilsheezy uses insane mode*ahhhhhhhhhh!*but it is more
intence than usual*argggggggg**with a tear in his eye,he
attacks SM,as the run for each other at head on colision*

Me:my pencil! Bax! lil! noooooooooooooooo! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
*bigsheezy also uses insane mode*i wont go down like this!
Bax,you wont die in vian! >.< *his speed is faster than usual*
ahhhhhhh!*he ends up behind fiece(avioding neno)and is almost
to fast for there sight*take this*he nocks fierce down wile
snatching one of his swords to replace his pencil*now die!!!

for a battle that started off friendly,things have turned to
the worst~2 lives were lost,and now things are to intence for
the remaining deviants!

Fiercedeity1770
*SM and Lil's attacks collide and the result is a massive explosion...(not as big as the previous ones... but even more devastating since it was more power unleashed in a smaller area)*

*After the explosion SM slowly stands surrounded by the flames of his and Lil's attacks... and says, "Explosions are my power... destruction I can take and control... but you...How dare you mourn... HOW DARE YOU!?! YOU'RE COMRADE KILLED HIMSELF BY HIS OWN CHOICE TO MURDER MY FRIEND!" "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!" SM, screamed toward the sky, overcome by rage his fists once again glow bright.*

*Neno realizes her target is no longer in her sights so she immediately discards her guns and dematerializes them as she makes a mad dash of sonic speed toward Fierce and Sheezy! Screaming, "I'm not letting... ANYONE ELSE DIE!!!"*

*At this moment, Fierce reaches out and grabs Kraymr's pocket watch, but as he does, he fails to block Sheezy's attack and is stabbed in the chest. He weakly smiles as his shirt turns red and his head tilts down and says one last message..."Was this worth it?"...silence........*

*Upon seeing this horrific sight! Neno stops in her tracks …shocked. A tear appears in her right eye...*

bigsheezy
lilsheezy:ahhhhhhhhhh! *understanding wut SM says is true*
*lil & SM stop to look at fierce as he falls to the ground*
lilsheezy:whu !*looks at big as though it wasnt like him to kill,
though hes never seen him in insane mode like himself*

Me:wut have i done*disapionted at himself* fierce,no!
*looks tword neno*no...*then to SM & lil*no...!
it wasnt worth it...

*with SM seeing this he goes burserk ready to take out lil*
*lilsheezy falls to his nees(insane mode wore off)and has
lost the will to fight any more**wile geting the crap
beatin out of him and not fighting back*

for a fight that started as a friendly compitition,the worst has happened

Fiercedeity1770
*Neno now stands in shock as she looks at Fierce lying face-down and motionless in a red puddle...silence...*

*Neno puts on her eyepiece and then runs over to Fierce's body (knocking Sheezy out of the way) to check for any sign of life... a pulse... breathing... anything... but no luck.*

*Neno cries, then she hears SM's attacks on Lil and yells out, "SM! STOP! No more! Please... no... more..."*

*SM hears her plea, stops attacking, sighs, and says, "You're right Neno, it's..." He stops and walks over to her, he then tries to comfort her as she continues to cry.*

*As SM walked over, Lil struggles to get up and move to see the scene at hand.*

*Neno continues to cry over her dead friend when all of a sudden she notices something glowing in Fierce's hand. She opens his hand to find the pocket watch glowing in it. She opens the watch to see it blinking... 9-8-7-6.... She knows what it means and whispers to SM who replies, "I hope you're right."

bigsheezy
Me:    (insane mode wore off)wut the...?the watch its...
"5-4-3-2"
lilsheezy:uh?

Fiercedeity1770
*Neno puts the watch back into Fierce's hand as it hits "1"*

*In this final second she says, "Game Over..."*

*Suddenly the clock hits "Zero!"and glows brightly as the hands begin spinning out of control! The clock then emits a pulse of energy that knocks everyone back.*

*SM yells out, "You were right Neno! HA HA HA! YOU WERE RIGHT!!!"*

*The watch transforms into an N64 game cartridge... LOZ: Ocarina of TIME!!!*

*Neno then grabs the cartridge and clutches it in her hand and starts glowing and says, "Here goes!" She materializes a fairy in a bottle and lets it out. It then flies around Fierce and as it does, the stab wound heals and he glows as he stands up.*

*Fierce opens his eyes and smiles, "All right... it's time to end this..." He then looks around and sees the fairy still around, "Catch it SM!" he yells, and catches it and says, "You're services are required for just a little longer." "Ok ok ok fine...", replies the fairy.*

*Fierce then takes the game back from Neno, who says, "I knew it would work." "Yup, Kraymr IS a genius...at least sometimes. XD", Fierce replied. As he takes the game from Neno, it turns back into a clock which he then presents to the fairy.*

*In a flash of light the fairy brings two figures out of the watch, then disappears....*

*The light dims and the two figures become recognizable...*

bigsheezy
Me:is that who i think it is?
lilsheezy: !
Me:...its...its....its...!

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce turns, looks, and says, "Hey look it's Mario and Luigi!"*

*cricket sounds* (Sorry this joke sounded better in my head.)

*Everyone turns their heads, look, and see that it really IS them!... *

*"Heya Fierce, how's it going?", said Mario. Fierce replies, "Oh... pretty good, just came back and then revived Kraymr and Bax, so yeah... doing good." "Oh that's good, well... see you next time!", Mario said as he and Luigi both took off to go save their girlfriends yet again.*

*Everyone's attention went back to the two figures and just as Fierce had said, it WAS Kraymr and Bax revived and standing before them.*

*Kraymr walks up to Fierce and says, "Hey, you are late you know." Fierce just laughs. Just then, Neno runs up and grabs the two of them and hugs each of them, "Oh I'm so glad you're both ok!". SM mutters, "Oh jeez... This is turning into a really touching moment... but uh... we just brought the guy who killed one of us back so... what now?". They all stopped and turned to their opponents and Fierce said, "Indeed...what now?" as he calmly retrieved his swords and put one of them in the sheath on his back.*

bigsheezy
*after big and lil got done saying there hellos to bax
and are no longer worried(but confused about the mario thing),
they turn to there opponents*

Me:well...
*everyones moment of silence*
Me:well,i think first things first.bax should opoligize for killing
kraymr...and himself!
Bax:like hell!im back and stronger than ever!if anything
is should kick his...*big punches him in the head*
Me:say it!
Bax: ok ok im sorry!but you put up a good fight though*he siad to kraymr*
and nice trick there with the watch! (^.0)  i thought i was done for...

Me:and im sorry too,for...well...ya know...the hole me stealing your sword
and stabbing you in the chest thing  (o.o)  i just dont have full controll over myself
in insane mode yet*ashamed at himself*.and bax dont you ever use that move agin,
you hear me!
Bax:yea yea,what ever...*big punches him in the head agin*
lilsheezy: *lil is happy that everyones ok*

Me:but for now,i think we should call it a draw
*put hand out,too shake fierces hand in forgivness*

Fiercedeity1770
*Fierce and Bigsheezy finish shaking hands and then sheaths his other sword. "Agreed my friend, we all had a good fight and that's all I wanted... we can now all walk away with our heads held up."*

*Kraymr turns to Bax and says, "Bax, please learn from this ordeal... do not be so eager to engage in combat... and never value victory more than life, and that goes for yours and the lives of your friends and others..."*

*StickManiac shakes Lil's hand and smiles as he says, "It's been a real blast!"*

*(Background/setting/music info Neno starts listening to "For those about to Rock, We salute YOU!" by ACDC)*

*Fierce signals the others that it's time to leave... "It's time for us to go back home... See ya later!",Fierce said as they turned to walk away towards the setting sun...*

*Right as they were about to vanish completely from sight Neno turns and yells back, "Don't forget what we've done for you... I wish you luck in the future." As she finishes speaking, SM, Kraymr, and Fierce all turn back to give their final farewell and salute them with her...as they all do, they vanish in a flash of light! (Right as the song ends!)*

bigsheezy
Me:well,that was a good fight!
Bax:i'll say!it was friggin awsome*big punches bax*
Me:you dont get to say anything after wut you did!
were ganna have a long talk about this later!
ya friggin maniac!

*lil just waves tword fierce and the others as they disapears*
lilsheezy:b...b...bye! 8D

*big and bax turn over and stare at lil*
Me & Bax:wut the...
Bax:holy crap,he can talk!?!?why dint you tell me he could talk?
Me:i didn't know...

(Closing)

DeviantArt Battle Complete!